DNF at 35%
I just couldn’t get into this book, and I usually love a good fantasy story. Good versus evil, coming of age, and all that. Heck, I can even enjoy a Chosen One trope from time to time, but here, I just kept losing my interest in the story.
I think the biggest issue is that it felt like there were no stakes in what was happening, at least not for the protagonist.
We are told that a great evil is waking up and will destroy the world as we know it if Storn and his two companions don’t go into this magical realm and make sure he keeps sleeping. Okay, good. Yet nothing in what the author describes of the land and people who inhabit it so far points towards this resurgence. We get mentions of tavern talk that things are getting bad, but we never experience it firsthand.
Also, it’s said that this great evil was imprisoned 80 years ago, yet only legends remain. What, nobody talks about those times because they “don’t like talking about them”? Really? WW2 happened about 80 years ago as well, and everyone still remembers what that was and the horrors it caused. You are telling me that all the people all over the land just spontaneousely decided to forget something just as traumatic? I don’t believe that.
More importantly, this big evil has no impact on Storn’s life. Well, apart from those weird bats tracking him during his journey to Ursula, but even that is only mentioned twice. What are the stakes in this journey for him? He is not in danger. He is not seeking anything. He is just told that he has to go into the Strid, and he just nods and tags along.
As far as my protagonist go, I like them actively participating in their fate and making decisions, even if they are bad ones. The only active decision Storn made was to run away from home by hitching a ride in the ragman’s wagon. After that, he just follows along and does what he is told for vague reasons that are never fully explained. He could walk away at any time, and his life wouldn’t be particularly changed.
This makes for a boring read, and I don’t feel like trying to fight my way through more pages to see if it ever gets more interesting.
PS: I received an advanced copy via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.








