DNF at 75%
I tried to finish this book, I really did, but I can’t force myself. I don’t understand where the 5-star reviews came from, but I would guess it’s from people who have no clue about how the military in general and the Navy (be it Earth Navy or space Navy) function.
I am a military spouse. I lived the life, I know the rules, and I know how these men and women talk and behave. And let me tell you, this ain’t it. The characters in this book behave more like they are the crew of a civilian cruise ship than a Space Navy battleship on a special mission. I mean who lets an Ensign address the Captain of the ship by first name? What is the deal with first names on a naval ship? Since when is that a thing? I can tell you that I never knew anybody’s first names in the service. It was either rank and last name or call sign.
Also, all the conversations in this book are way too casual. All of the characters read as civilians on a cruise ship instead of elite military.
Plus, most of the characters are just plain dumb. Why did it take this long to look at the drone footage they took at the stranded ship? The captain should have ordered a review of all of them immediately after the ship imploded. He also should have interrogated Temkin immediately and asked all the hard questions. Instead, he pussyfoots around his “feelings”. Dude, that ship imploded, and before it did, there were signs of a shootout. And your only survivor tells you a story that’s too strange to believe. He should be in the brig. A message should have been sent to High Command immediately with all details and a request for assistance.
Most of the characters fail to arrive at obvious conclusions because otherwise the plot wouldn’t happen. I mean, why does it take them weeks to even think about checking their mainframe for a cyber attack? Your ship has been throwing suspicious errors left and right, a med robot went murderous, yet nobody went on high alert until the Martian frigates collided.
The author also tends to overexplain everything ad-noseum. First the Captain says something to one character, then he explains almost the same thing to another, then they say they will do something… before they go ahead and do it. The action drags, the dialogue between characters is painful to read, and the story is propelled forward only because nobody can think logically in this future, it seems.
I will not be recommending this book.









